Fiction Review: Cuttlefish

| January 30, 2013

BY DAVE FREER
Publisher: Pyr 2012
Reviewed by Nimue Brown, assisted by James

CuttlefishThis is a particularly intriguing alternate history novel that does not have an immediately obvious point of departure from actual history. Helpfully, author Dave Freer includes an author note at the end explaining the little, human change that gives him a flooded and steampowered reality with a lingering British Empire and subversive heroes. His choice of when to branch off (I’m not saying what, it would be a spoiler) is fascinating all by itself.

The world building is exquisitely handled; developed through action and storytelling in a way that will really pull you in. The page turner of a plot has smaller, character-driven narratives underpinned by a much bigger and more political storyline. Younger readers may not pick up on all these details and may not know enough history to fully get the setup, as was the case with my co-reviewer, but this is no barrier to really enjoying the book. As with the Harry Potter books, it’s the background with its politics and adult themes, just visible behind the young protagonists, that will fascinate the older reader.

Characters in this story are engaging and plausible, and the same can be said of the science. Author notes clarify the technical aspects and reveal the one small ‘cheat’ in the mix. People who like solid science in their Steampunk worlds, and who want to know how it all works, will no doubt enjoy this aspect, but for those who are more concerned with fiction than fact, I should add that it doesn’t intrude on the flow of the story at all.

My ten year old co-reviewer did not want to put the book down, describing it in the following terms… “amazing…surprising… well written…wow…mad in a good way…completely unexpected.” I’d suggest this is an excellent buy for YA readers generally, and especially younger Steampunks. Cuttlefish should engage YA readers of both genders, and the grownups are going to want to read it too.

Book Review: Code Name Verity

| January 7, 2013

I hope everyone has had an awesome holiday season – I know I have.

But back to book reviews. There seems to be a dearth of actual Dieselpunk titles – we certainly haven’t been offered any review copies anyway, so I offer you some peripherally related material. I’ve read some stuff that would definitely be of interest to a Dieselpunk audience. This one is a YA historical fiction novel set in WWII.

I picked this one up because a fellow reviewer raved about it. She said she didn’t want to say too much about it because it would be so easy to give things away, since the story involved an unreliable narrator. But she had rated it as highly as she ever rated a book, and then I saw there was an airplane on the cover. I’m interested in WWII, as any proper Dieselpunk would be, and I love flying and think airplanes are the coolest thing in the world.

Well, Anna was right about not wanting to say too much about the plot. It begins with Julie, an agent of the French resistance, who’s been captured by the Gestapo in a fictional town in France. She’s been tortured, and writes that she’s been given paper to write her confession on. It’s eerie to read it, because she addresses the reader as if you’re the Gestapo officers torturing her.

It’s clear that she’s stalling, starting her story from her childhood, rather than getting to the point, and you have to keep in mind that she’s writing this for the Gestapo, and however many times she swears she’s telling the truth, it’s hard to tell how much she might be holding back. She tells the story of her friend Maddie, who flies planes for the Air Transport Auxilliary, and how Maddie came to be a pilot. I was captivated by the airplane parts

But then… well, I won’t say too much more, but the author has apologized (“ewein” in the comments) for making me cry on the bus, over on my personal website. Never had a book hit me so hard, so beautifully. Apparently it’s rated somewhere as one of the top 5 books that will make you cry. I’ve choked up on a scene before, but not like this.

Book Review: The Unnaturalists

| December 2, 2012

I’ve wanted to read this steampunk YA since I saw the pretty, pretty cover on someone’s book blog. First off, I have to say a big THANK you to the artist who drew Vespa, because WOW you got the description right! It’s like the artist actually read the book. I was reading another steampunk YA a short time ago – it shall remain unnamed – and was spitting mad because the girl was described as “pale with light blonde hair”, and apparently the cover artist just decided to stick Megan Fox in a ball gown on the front (the dress wasn’t even correct for the period either, completely modern).
Now for the actual book…
What I liked about it: Trent blends magic and science together, which I thought was a really new and interesting concept. Scientists like Newton and Tesla are elevated to saints, and science has basically become a strict religion, while anyone who shows a slight interest in magic is called a heretic. While so much YA literature struggles with originality, Tiffany Trent has created a totally unique world. There are also creatures that are rarely used in YA in this book, for example: A Manticore, a Sphinx, raven-headed gaurds, ect. For someone thoroughly sick of vampires and werewolves, this taste of “new” and different mythological creatures is a breath of fresh air.
The writing. I always have to mention the writing in book reviews, since I’m so very critical the entire time I’m reading. Ms. Trent truly has talent. The narration from Vespa’s point of view is done very well. It covers all the bases. She sounds exactly like a proper young English girl in the 19th century, but the author has also managed to make the prose engaging, regardless of the age of the reader.
I also loved Ms. Trent’s “Tinkers”. They’re reminiscent of Chinese Gypsies. Forest people who honour the old ways of magic and the creatures around them. Their history and lore actually made me feel like I was reading about a real race of people.
What I didn’t like about it: Readers be warned. The chapters switch between Vespa’s first person (present tense) narration, and a tinker named Syrus, whose story is told in third person (past tense). At first this really threw me out of the story and almost derailed the entire thing for me. But eventually I did get used to it. I think I would have preferred, if it had to switch back and forth, for both narrations to be in first person.
I didn’t connect with Vespa’s love interest. I grew to like him later on, but when she first started feeling the pangs of attraction it left me scratching my head, not sighing over him.
Though I would still label it in the steampunk genre, there wasn’t very much that ran on steam, everything is myth powered. Of course, this makes the book unique, so you could look at that as good or bad.
Something that struck me is that (SPOILERS) when Vespa learns she is a witch, she doesn’t react strongly enough. She’s been brainwashed to think that magic is evil and science is her religion. Why isn’t she freaking out more? After a few dizzy spells she seems to be absolutely fine with it, and there isn’t really a lot of denial going on. Also, she abandons everything she’d been taught very very quickly. For someone who dreamed about being a female scientist at the start of the book, she abandons it for magic with lightning speed. Everyone else seems to regard magic with disgust, but she embraces it very easily. I would have expected her to be a little more brainwashed. Or, if she was a rebel, I would have expected some indication of her attraction to the magic earlier on in the book. We see that she’s adventurous, but little else.
In Conclusion: Would I recommend The Unnaturalists? Yes. It was a unique and entertaining look at an alternate London, and I loved the glimpses of all the different mythical creatures. The world dreamed up by Tiffany Trent is absolutely worth a read.
The Unnaturalists gets 6 out of 8 Octopus legs (and a thumbs up by the looks of it)!


Racist Things Steampunks Are Not Immune To: Aversive Racism

| February 16, 2012

I talk a lot about racism in my work, not least because, uh, part of why I get pretty fucking angry about colonialism and whatnot is because the histories of colonialism that many POC live with today are the foundation for systemic racism that exists today.

It’s gotten to the point where I am kind of aggressively avoiding novels that feature straight white dudes unless it’s a YA (out of the four novels I have attempted to read in the last while, the only one I could stand was a YA novel) because I am just kind of pissed off at the reminder that straight white dudes have been allowed to call the shots when they have been so utterly wrong, and have created such utterly wrong worlds, both in fiction and in reality, and continue to be accepted when they exhibit utterly wrong behaviour. It gets to the point where I want to cloister all my white friends who are wonderful people away from all this wrongness in case it’s catching, like a flu.

But I can’t, so instead I go about identifying Things That Are Wrong and tell any listening public (like all four of you reading this blog!) about them, so I have the satisfaction of having at least attempted to mitigate the wrongness of the world. And you will have some names for Things That Are Generally Wrong With The World that also creep into steampunk, so you can start learning how to call it as you see it and thus help in the long arduous battle against racism in steampunk! Our first term is: Aversive Racism!

Aversive Racism is when people, in particular white liberals, say that they are not racist, and may genuinely consciously believe in egalitarianism, but unthinkingly display a bias. This bias is unconscious, although very easy to see if you’re a POC on the receiving end of it.

The Implications of Less Devastated Empires

| December 23, 2011

So let’s talk about Scott Westerfeld’s Goliath, ya’ll. Did you like it? I liked it, just like I liked Leviathan, and I liked Behemoth, and I thought Goliath was very well done indeed. The slow dawning realization of Aleks that his best friend is, after all, a girl and the OMG AWKWARD chapters afterwards and the EVEN MORE AWKWARD chapters when he realizes Deryn is in love with him was indeed super-awkward and I enjoyed that, possibly to an unwholesome degree.

I was a bit iffy with the visit to Japan, but ehh, it’s Japan, weird shit happens there all the time, I guess, and I thought it was nice that we took a trip down to Mexico and met General Francisco Villa. The little rivalry between the journalists was fun, and I, too, wished to punch Eddie Malone when he also discovers Deryn’s secret and gets to writing all about it. And I love how Aleks puts himself out there to protect Deryn, because you know, that is what best friends do! 
And yes, I laughed out loud at that middle-of-the-book chapter where Aleks is really really really realizing that Deryn is, indeed! for realsies! a girl! And then Deryn takes advantage of it! And I was like, yea Deryn, you go for it girl, life’s too short to spend it not kissing boys. Also, Dr. Barlow / Count Volger — I WILL GO DOWN WITH THIS SHIP, understand? 
And Lilit! My revolutionary anti-patriarchy homegirl! I knew in Behemoth that she was going to get sent away. If possible, get your hands on Marilyn French’s From Eve to Dawn series; it’s a history of women from as much recorded history as possible, and is French’s ten-year opus. In it, French points to how so many times, women become involved in movements that will help everyone, and they get with them specifically because they see potential, and are told, all the time, “wait your turn, let us get rights for the men first” and when the men get the rights they want, they set the women aside, telling them, “you’re asking for too much.” Women constantly contribute to political movements led by men only to get shafted as soon as the men’s goals have been achieved, and women’s needs are ignored in due course. I was sad to see this happen to Lilit, but it still made sense to me, and isn’t it sad that it made sense to me that this was the logical way her patriarchal movement would play out?
Fine, yeah, okay, Deryn isn’t a princess by the end of it, and Aleks goes into obscurity instead of taking up the throne, that’s cool (although I sometimes have misgivings about this; I’d rather thought Aleks had proven himself as a good leader and could’ve found some way of returning to his people while still abdicating, but, whatever, I’m the kind of person who still believes in huge honking scapegoats ultimate martyrs vain and useless things symbolic functions of royalty.
And of course Westerfeld, whenever we exchange tweets, is a cool dude, and it’s nice to have him out at #steampunkchat, and I teethgnash at having missed meeting him earlier this year in New York City (where he ruined his feet walking at BEA and thus missed the Steampunk Bible signing as a result), bla bla obligatory this-white-dude-is-cool-by-me disclaimer bla-di-bla.
Now that that’s out of the way, I can move on to talking about what I really want to talk about. Also, spoilers.
“Zoology,” Dr. Barlow reminds Deryn, “is the backbone of our empire” (395). And for all the larking in the sky, the text makes it clear that the stakes of Aleks’ mission–to save the world, poor sod–are stakes that everyone in Europe, and the neighbouring Ottoman Empire, partake of. General Villa’s fight is tied to American business; the Japanese are still slightly beholden to Western technologies (notice how the British Leviathan heads towards Japan just to show up and show off, indicating that Japan still looks to the West for imperial inspiration in this iteration, and the hierarchy of European superiority still remains firmly entrenched). There’s no mention of Japan’s imperial ambitions in Manchuria (that I remember, anyway). 
So, all the great European powers are fighting, and because of the way the war plays out, with all the advanced technology, everyone gets their boom-bangs in much faster, too. I remember in Belgarath the Sorcerer, by David Eddings, Belgarath complains, in an internal aside to the reader, “all these wars always ends up at conference tables anyway! Why can’t they just start there??” (paraphrased, of course) 
There’s always an assumption of a specific trajectory on how such conflict begins: everybody wants to get a bigger piece of pie, everybody gets mad at everybody else for impinging on said pieces of pie, everybody gets into a big ol’ pie fight, the pie gets ruined, someone or more gets hurt from pie in the eye, everybody stops in horror at what has happened to the pie, they gruffly say sorry, attempt some cleanup and make some solemn promises about how to divide up the next pie. (Nobody stops to question the existence or the necessity of the pie.)
And sometimes, there is an assumption that accelerated technology also means accelerated trajectories of this sort. I think Cherie Priest got it right that accelerated technology actually prolongs trajectories of conflict. I don’t believe in one second that people with so much power–and there is so much power in a Clanker machine! We saw Clankers use their machines to murder Deryn’s squad in Behemoth! And there is so much power in Darwinist tech! The flechette bats are pretty much tiny little living machine guns!–I don’t believe these people would actually give up fighting so easily. World leaders have never truly recognized the costs of their stupid wars, all through history, even in our fucking present. There IS a reason why Afghani and Iraqi casualties far outnumber the 3000 deaths that supposedly precipitated the Iraqi War. 
Science is a tool. And for much of history, science, particularly in the hands of Western powers, has been used to conquer and destroy. For all that people tout about the potential of science for world peace and somesuch, all too often, technology that can actually aid people? Exploited for greatest commercial wealth. Technology that aids destruction? Co-opted by militaries all over the world, for “self-defense”, and we all know what I think about that.
At the end of the book, Westerfeld very nicely writes to his YA readers about the differences between his book and recorded history, which I think is also really important, because YA audiences are keen to learn. Young people want to learn. That is how they grow. And growing is what young things do. But Westerfeld also writes this:

“At the end of Goliath, however, my fictional Great War would seem to be drawing to a close. … Europe may well emerge from this war less devastated than in our world, and therefore less vulnerable to worse tragedies to come.” (underline mine)